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May God bless both of us as we grow as writers together!


L.A,P.,

You did an awesome job creating this monologue. I laughed out loud when your main character revealed the other party was gagged.

There was one expression that stumped me: "three-by-nine smile". What the heck is a three-by-nine" smile?

Other than that the words pretty much made sense to me and I enjoyed the dialect.

However, I am only giving you 4 1/2 stars because in the end, I was not sure about what had happened and what was going on.

So, to sum up:

1. The monologue was entertaining, engaging and fun to read -- and well-done as to a dialect (real or conjured up, I'm not sure which).

2. I needed a bit more clarity as to the overall storyline.

Disclaimer: I do not write fiction. I am not particularly familiar with your genre. I did this review as part of this activity: "a very Wodehouse challenge" Open in new Window.

Had it not been for this activity, I likely would not have read this story -- and, the good news is: I ENJOYED IT! *Laugh*



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