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| (5.0)  HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"  Howdy, Jo, and happy 15th (WOW!) 'birthday' on here! This is a really neat piece, and you did an excellent job with the prompt. I love how you wrote this in the 1st person, even tho that's what was required, but you did an especially good job with this! Referring to the florist as 'the butcher' was perfect, and the way you showed your fear each time a customer approached was very well done. In fact, I think there might be a horror story in here somewhere!  Unfortunately though, your luck finally ran out at the end, but you're still a beautiful flower! A couple of tiny niggles (you know I only bring these up cuz great pieces like this shouldn't have any errors!) '...and the cars slow(ed) down on the road' 'As the woman replied(,) the word was lost on the breeze' Well done, Jo, and certainly deserving of those ribbons! On a side note, I noticed you've been M.I.A. for a while around here. I've heard you've been haunting Facebook, though, so I hope everything is alright! I'd love to see you back here! We miss ya! Kee ponw ritin gon, my friend, and may you have many more wonderful 'birthdays' on WdC!
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