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 The Airport Fiasco Open in new Window. [E]
I WILL get sleep...
by Ben Author Icon
Review by Angus Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Greetings, Ben!
This is good. You have a mischievous nature, and I don't blame you for doing what you did to that rude man! *Laugh* Like you said, 'Of all the nerve!'
You did a great job with the descriptions, and the spelling and grammar were flawless. Your prose was also good. Not quite great, but good. But considering how young you are, that will certainly come in time as you progress as a writer.
Speaking of that, I'm very impressed that you're taking an interest in writing semi-seriously at this age. Granted, I was writing at 15 also, but I never took it seriously until a few years ago. I finally decided it was time to get published, and WdC here helped me do just that! I only wish I would have taken it seriously when I was your age. But then again, that was before the internet and computers (circa 1980).
Another thing I'm impressed about is that you're not embarrassed to share you stories with us. A lot of people who join this site tend to just review other people, while keeping their own stories 'locked up' for fear of criticism or rejection. But that's not what this site is about! We're all here to help each other become BETTER!
Great job, Ben!
Kee ponw ritin gon, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write (which you apparently do), then you're going to love it here!

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