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| (5.0)| Hi there, Patrece! This is great! I love the idea of having a baby's first few days of life discussed by the baby himself, and apparently his point of view about it isn't too good. You did an excellent job with this, Patrece. Going into detail about eating, pooping and peeing, being licked by that big ball of hair  , and all of the rest of the torment they have to go through, and writing it in the 1st person was a brilliant style to write this in!This reminds me of a comment by the late Sam Kinison where he talks about being a free floating spirit until his parents had to go and *&%# and bring his @%* down here! Excellent job, Patrece! One suggestion, and a couple of comments: I don't think they make car seats that small for newborns, do they? 'what parent wants an ugly, wrinkly, alien looking kid?' (Amen to that! There's no such thing as a 'beautiful' new born baby!) I used to refer that 'that rubber thingy' as the 'snot sucker'. Thanks for the laughs, my friend. I don't know if this won, but it sure looks like a winner to me! Kee ponw ritin gon, and have a magnificent day!
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