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 Rudy's Surf Shop Open in new Window. [E]
Flash Fiction Entry. Prompt: gun, money, plot
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi Bob H!
For such a short and simple piece, this really isn't too bad. I love surprise endings, and you did just that with this. I'm not sure what contest this is for, but you did a great job using the plot words (you almost over-used them, in my opinion), and the spelling and grammar were flawless (thank you!).
Nice job.
Kee ponw ritin gon, good luck in the contest, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here!
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