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 The Law Open in new Window. [E]
Another poem from the prompt
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Review by eyestar~* Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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HI Michael! Your title popped up on the Random reads so here I am with a review to celebrate you. *Delight*

This is an evocative short bit of philosophy that prompts one to ponder. It is interesting to have love as a law. *Thumbsup* How many folks often break it?

Hatred as Life's crime is thought provoking too. It is sad truth. I often think Judgement is the enemy of Love itself too.

I like the way you have written this on the page and the capital letters are not distracting. Is there a reason the last word has no cap? It broke your pattern.

I wondered what the prompt was for this. You can always add it as a little author's note at the bottom of the page. *Wink*

Thanks for sharing your vision and giving us something to think about. *Starstruck*
Keep on musing and write on!
eyestar
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