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Hi The Girl With Too Many Extravagant Dreams,

This is a wonderful piece. The title is enigmatic. The reader knows they will be reading about positivity but little else. They will begin to read to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This continues the momentum you began with the title. The reader will read to the very last word. This is a very personal piece. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person and a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use a formal yet emotional style that the reader finds very appealing. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:

1)donât stop smiling, donât be negative.-The apostrophes being replaced by these strange a symbols sometimes happen when you submit the piece in complex format. Reload the piece in simple format, and that should fix the problem.

Great job.