Another beautiful poem. I really wish I could give you suggestions and some constructive reviews, but you have such a masterful way with words it's hard. I really like the imagery in this poem and how it tells such a heartbreaking, but lovely story. I'm glad her husband found the rings and that he has them to remember her by. I'm very sorry for your loss and I'm glad you have your poetry to channel your feelings. I like the rhyme scheme in this poem--it flows well. However, it gives it a whimsical quality which kind of sounds strange with the content, but that's just me. I find that rhyming is tricky because of the way it sounds and finding the right rhymes. I think you found good rhyming words that are unique. I do like the imagery of gold with the idea of Christmas, those images really mesh together for me. Once again you are a master with the last lines of your poem. They really resonate in finality and permanence. I like that you ended with a golden chain because I think that imagery shows that he kept the rings near him and how much they truly meant. Another great poem, keep up the good work!

Thanks again! And write on!

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