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Hi LJay Author IconMail Icon*Smile*

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I'm Samberine Everose Author IconMail Iconyour little GF Garden Fairy friend here in WDC. *FairyL*
and I'm here to give you a review as my *Giftr* to you for being here*ButterflyR*

By the way CONGRATULATIONS! for being a registered Author in this wonderful World of Writing Dot Com. *Smile*I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings and finding your way up here.

*ExclaimR* I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste. *Smile*

*Reading* THE TITLE-
My tiny wings brought me into the Newbie Review Corner to find something to review, and while I'm flapping my little wings, this piece of yours did catch my attention.
My Prince- I always think of prince when I was a little girl, dreaming a prince in a palace.
Maybe a prince is something or someone we admired, interest, inspiration or muse.
Using the pronoun possessive My combined it to the word prince, creates an endearment effect.
And that imagery enticed me as your reader.

Good job, because the title hooked me as your reader. *Thumbsup*

*Star* A title in poetry should be captivating to attract or enticed a reader, because a title served as the main door before entering to the main body of a piece, this is where the first impression and expectation was created for a prospective reader.

THE BODY-
As I look and enter to the body of your piece, and try to mused along the weaved lines.
Nice choices of words, created an impact effect with a firm tone or mood.
I imagined the classical poems while reading this piece of yours.
Good used of Punctuation Marks.
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*Cut* COMMENTS AND SUGGESTION:

Well, I didn't find any word that will distract the flow of the poem.
And I have no doubt arise.


*Pencil* Over all, this piece is a good read, I can say that its well done, and I like it.
Carrying the romantic words full of emotional word pattern. *Smile*

Thank you for sharing this poetry of yours, and the enjoyment in reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.*Smile*

Regards,

Samberine Sig.
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