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Hi Leishy,
This is a fantastic story. The tone is excites and full of enthusiasm. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is taken by the hustle and bustle of the story. They will read to the very last word. The plot is straight forward and moves along logically. The story centers around three sisters(triplets)that are preparing to go to a game. The story is narrative as opposed to conflict based. This is rare in literature and very interesting. There is no doubt about what is going in here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The story is all dialogue, and the setting and character's appearances is left to the reader's imagination. This is a very effective technique. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.