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Hi EmpressEjvlana,
This is a morose but very enjoyable piece. The title is very attention getting. The reader wants to know about your love and what is going on here. They will begin reading the piece. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This continues the momentum you created with the title. The reader will settle in to read to the last word of this piece. The piece is very personal. You talk about a love that has ended but still remains an integral part of you. The reader is reminded of those unforgettable loves that are hard, if not impossible, to completely forget. A great deal of your personality comes through in the piece. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as they read. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use a highly emotional style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.