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A strong opening sentence for this paragraph that holds great insight. It sets the tone for what is to come and demands attention.

I believe a comma was to be used in the first sentence, rather than a period. Either that, or capitalize Our, then we have cohesion. Further along in the paragraph, Untill is not only mispelled, but I fill it isn't quite the right word for the sentence. Perhaps the word should be "then" .

loose should be lose...

Overall a good piece of writing, just needs some editing and fine tuning to come around. I enjoyed the purpose of the words and the message trying to be conveyed.

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