Thank you for sharing.

This gave me goose bumps as I read it. I had no idea where this was going until I read the prompt. Words do have power, whether we realize it or not.

You built the tension up dramatically. I could picture the scene clearly in my head and I wanted so much to grab the baby from the mom...to me, it was that intense. I see you wrote this for a contest. I hope you do/did well with it. I spotted no typos or grammar issues with your writing.

I am glad to see that you are making yourself at home with Writing.com. I enjoy reading your work, and look forward to more from you.

sincerely,
amy

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