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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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Hi Laura!
I like the concept of this, but it's a little short, and I think you could have taken it a bit further. And the ending was a little too nice.
The spelling and grammar were excellent, though.
Kee ponw ritin gon, Laura, and I hope to see more of your entries in the contest!
Oh, and welcome to WdC! If you love to write, then you're going to love it here!

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