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Ah what a tale you weave with your creative tongue and fellowship of Tolkien. I found myself mesmerized and eager to hear the story you had to share, if only to check in on some of my favorite characters of old.

I only had one question, how can you continue with the ring, if the ring was but destroyed in the end? I found this made me want to read the story every more.

One small typo at the very end that is almost missed. With, is missing an eye, could that be the all seeing eye? You will find this in the last few sentences.

So creative you grabbed my attention and had me scouring for more. Great job.

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