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| Hi, Victoria. Nixie, here. Overall Impression My grandchildren can't get enough of the fantasy stories on television. I think it's the magical powers, and the way they all work together to form a team who solves a problem. I don't think dancing on flower heads would impress them. lol A few thoughts Sorry, I guess that had to leave my mind first. The cover art for this story is precious and complimentary to the work. While I read, my eyes kept drifting back to the image, which kept me smiling. Sweet little child who renamed herself and chose to live as a fairy. Since her human home wasn't mentioned, I imagined she escaped an unpleasant environment. She did find the ring under a dirty shelf. Who knows where she lived. Much better to be dancing on a Daffodil head. At least that's the story I'm telling myself, so I won't ask where her parents are. Lasting Impression The bits of rhyming in here were an added delight. I was worried when she flew to meet the sun, but I guess there's fairy magic and she didn't get toasted. In that paragraph, did you mean to end the sentence with lend? I didn't quite get that part. I think kids would like this story because it shows how little does not mean powerless against the world.  I thought you made up the word tittle to rhyme, but when it wasn't flagged as a misspell, I looked it up. How did I not know that was a word? I'm reading the wrong kinds of fiction? Cute story.   My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!"  .
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