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 A Healing of Souls Open in new Window. [13+]
A poem based on a comment made by a friend of mine
by Nicola Author Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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What brought the Hand of THiNG to your port?

*Hand1*You visited me recently and woke me up. So, here I am meandering over to visit and send a review!

What Does THiNG think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* The question is how can one help others when one feels at a loss? The answer is that in the helping you might find yourself. That is the big conclusion that struck me as I read this. We all feel inadequate (although some are loathe to admit it) and lost in this thing called life at times.

But, it is when we reach out to others that we can see more clearly what we need to see. When we focus on ourselves, we just get more and more mired in frustration I think.

What does THiNG applaud about while reading your item?

I loved it all, especially this part:
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"How can I dance the waltz of perfect transition,
In a glide of millennia to come,
Stars’ lights beckoning,
When my footing continually falters,
Wavers,
And I stagger,
Stumbling to centuries past?"

Feeling insecure or humble is the best way to reach out a hand to someone in need. Who wants a world expert to help them, anyway when you stop and think about it?

Awesome poem!


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THiNG a.k.a. HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. 4ps

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I am not an expert on poetry or prose or much else. I am merely a reader who loves to read. I am pretty much done with editing as I realize that more and more I do not enjoy doing that. I read and review and react to what I read on the page. So, this is not a detailed edit. It is a review, which is my reaction to the writing at hand, based on my own experiences. So, with that in mind, take the review for what it is worth - which is one ordinary soul's opinion. If I send a review, it means I enjoyed my reading experience enough to let you know it.

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