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![]() What brought the Hand of THiNG to your port? ![]() What Does THiNG think about while perusing your item? ![]() ![]() It sounds like Davey is open to new adventures, which is a good thing in a human child. It is always nice to see that. A good snack gives the day some memorable experiences to round it out. What does THiNG applaud about while reading your item? I liked how Davey forgot to fuss when his parents left and became interested in what he was seeing. I am sure the cows were very impressed with him, too. Maybe they even dreamt about him. Cows do dream, you know. Fine story! ![]() THiNG a.k.a. HOOVES, a.k.a. COWser Soze, a.k.a. 4ps ![]() ![]() I am not an expert on poetry or prose or much else. I am merely a reader who loves to read. I am pretty much done with editing as I realize that more and more I do not enjoy doing that. I read and review and react to what I read on the page. So, this is not a detailed edit. It is a review, which is my reaction to the writing at hand, based on my own experiences. So, with that in mind, take the review for what it is worth - which is one ordinary soul's opinion. If I send a review, it means I enjoyed my reading experience enough to let you know it. Sometimes people like to pick apart reviews. I don't really go in for that sort of navel gazing. ![]() ![]() Ta Ta until we meet again.... "Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" ![]() ![]() ![]()
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