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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Ms. Pat, I like to read the story of yours. I just read your story Three Chickadees.

I always like the way of your writing and story telling. You used some good word choice to create the mood of the story. The dialogue flows between the character “Lornda” “Pat” and “Joy” is really interesting. That makes me read this story from beginning to the end. The three dancing duckling are really beautiful.

The character building is quite well. I think it followed the prompt it followed the prompt properly. I hope and wish one day I would like a story like you.
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