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Ann, I first time read a romantic story of yours.

The main character Jaquelina was sad and she cannot deal with her past memories. Jaquelina liked to watch her children laugh and ran on the beach. One stormy day a big wave snatched her children. Since their deaths she was alone and she could not forget them. She cried alone. But one day her sadness was gone when she met “John” a handsome man who turned her life. He comes in her life like sunshine, her grief was gone slowly and she was happy with him.

I always like the way of your writing. The main character Jaquelina and the other character developed well.
Nice imagination. The conversation between the characters flowed normally. I enjoyed your story.


Mina.

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