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Hi klabrosse,
This is an amazing poem. The tone is formal and contemplative. It captures all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is left thinking about their own impressions of what goes on around them and how they express themselves everyday. They will read to the very last word. The free verse style works well in such an emotionally charged poem, and you have handled it very well. The poem has a wonderful rhythm. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.