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 | Silver Lining  [E] Even if the world seems to be over, remember there is always a spark of hope.  |
| (4.5)  "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"        THIS IS A REVIEW BY THE ANNIVERSARY GROUP IT IS A GIFT FOR YOU!  Item Title: Silver Lining Author: RarGoesMeh Type of writing: PoetryReviewed by:  Lisa Noe First Impression: Hello RarGoesMeh, I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary, I'm going to give you a detailed review today in order to aid you in becoming a better writer. "Beauty is in our Words"I think you did a fabulous job for a newbie, welcome and know that my comments are to help you not insult you. This poem is a well written piece, The Poem has seven stanzas with four lines each,quatrains, there is no rhyming in this poem which I think makes it better because of the subject matter. The title is good and as is the description They told me what to expect from this poem. The tone was good and I liked the flow of your poem. My favorite stanza is the following because you are optimistic about the world. excerpt from writing: Every thing happens for a reason, Mysterious are the workings of God. Destruction, famine, and loss are still upon us, But somehow the world will go on. suggestions: I did not see any mistakes I think you did very well on this project.conclusion:thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You. 
 Lisa Ann Noe ~~Image #4000 Sharing Restricted~~  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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