I am participating in A Very Wodehouse Challenge and I have been made editor of a men's magazine which I have to select articles on WDC. I have selected 'The Outlaw' because I feel it goes into the things that would go through a man's mind when dating a woman. You go into the things such as how she is going to think about him to how his friends will think about the relationship to how the town will even see them. I like how you showed the expectation of fishing with Beth which was not the same caliber as the way Jake thought of fishing in his mind, in reality Beth seemed to like fishing with her own equipment and even though she did not catch as many fish as Jake hers were bigger. I like how you left the ending for the reader to use his/her imagination about what happened next.

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