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 N. B. Open in new Window. [E]
A poem about gender.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi WritingWalter,
This is a very powerful poem. The tone is formal. The poem talks about not being ashamed of who you are. The tone suits the subject matter very well. The reader is taken completely by the message of the poem. They will read to the very last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a fantastic rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.

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