Wow, Sleeping Forest is a power writer see here "Unknown Soldiers" 

I felt this poem in my gut and that's an experience.

War is a relative thing, maybe it cannot be described but it can be expressed and felt.

Very dramatic visuals like;
flowers that have been trampled
Birds have fallen to the earth
and more

The form is held in this Free Form with a touch of spice

The title is a good one.

The beginning and ending are great.

It's well shaped (nice line length)

^5

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