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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE POEM

The evokes nature to paint a picture of love.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

Nice word play.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is a quatrain. It follows the structure well. The author has also explained the structure which I appreciate.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

I have no suggestions for improvement. The poem shows a progression, from beginning to end through the ever changing dynamic of falling water. There's hidden meaning, which I liked since it compelled me to think deeper about message conveyed.

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