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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE POEM

The poem entwines nature and love.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

The poem captures a nice visual.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is a haiku, perfect for February as it was National Haiku Writing Month!

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

I have no suggestions for improvement. Great word play. I loved the last line, it gave me pause to think - and see - love in nature. Well done!

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