My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

THE POEM

A poem that captures the visceral and stirring emotions of falling in love.

WHAT I LIKED

I loved the pulse pounding words that were used to create a sense of urgency and intense rush which is often felt when falling love. Well done!

STRUCTURE

This is a free form with no apparent rythme scheme.

MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.

PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

I have no suggestions for improvement. Great word play. Well Done!