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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi jason,
This is an essay that lets the reader see you as a person. The title is enigmatic. It grabs all the reader's interest and makes them want to read on. The introduction is short but sets up your topic well. The knows what they will get out of the essay. The essay is obviously from personal experience. The reader is very appreciative of the personal look the essay gives them of you. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the essay tedious. You have a relaxed, conversational style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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