Major feeling is sadness.
A situation too many are living through.
Love lost and families torn asunder.
It shouldn't be this way. What can be done?
Imagery that brings your story to life.

Form is standard fare.
Rhyme scheme is consistent and melodious.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is slow and sensory filled.
Grammatically snafu free, thank you for being on the WdC.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div

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