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| (4.5)  HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"  I have to start by admitting that I don't know much about the steampunk genre. In fact, this might be the first steampunk story I've read so I although I was familiar with the requirements, I wasn't sure what to expect. But it soon became clear what it was and it turned out to be very intriguing. I don't know if this is a typical story for the genre but I intend to read more and find out!  Although there wasn't much in the way of descriptions, I could still picture the scene well, and both Pennyworth and Jenkins were quite easy to imagine - minus one little detail you only revealed at the end. I was intrigued what it was that Pennyworth could have seen, but you didn't give it away which will make any reader want to read the whole story to find out. The way you let the suspense build up was nicely done. There was one potential error near the beginning where you wrote, Jenkins turned immediately, holding his sooty hands to his scruffy, weathered face. Should that have said, "Pennyworth turned..."? It seems to make more sense that way. I enjoyed this story, for me it was a great introduction to the genre and I will certainly read more in the future!    My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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