Woohoo! Exactly 100 words! Well done! I had no idea it was a ruler that the "Master" was using until the little bit about behaving in class. I was wondering what in the world the "twelve inches" were until the end. Congrats on holding me in suspense even for just a short time! You made a minor beating seem more important and agonizing than one would think it would be.



I saw no grammar or spelling mistakes at all. This was a very well structured and executed short story. The only thing I didn't understand was why the teacher hit the student on the back. I was under the impression that it was always done on the student's palm, but that could just be me. Overall, well done! Keep writing!

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