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Hi SjW,
This is a emotionally charged story that the reader will not stop reading. The tone is heartbroken and full of melancholy. It grips the reader's heart and makes them want to read on. The reader is swept away by sympathy for the woman in the story and her baby. There is also an element of suspense. Will she return for her baby. The plot is straight forward and moves along logically. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt as to what is going on here. Characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is sparse but realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured. The shift between points of view of the woman and baby is done smoothly. The story is consistent in terms of tense. Great job.