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 Sleeping Beauty Wild Hunt Open in new Window. [E]
A struggle of emotions between awake and sleep state
by TJ Marie Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I found this poem to be extremely deep. Although I'm not really sure what it is about. Is the author truly dreaming in a nighttime slumber or is this something deeper. A coma perhaps? the only grammatical error I saw was "In this mess, many call in life," should be many call it life. Other than that perfect. Good luck in your contest!
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