First off, I have to say, this was a very enjoyable read! You have a very good story here, with a great plot and very well-written characters.

I think you have done a great job with the writing i this story. It has a good flow that is easy to follow and understand, the characters are well-written and their motives are easy to understand, and the length and language are appropriate for the target audience of this story. I found this story to be very heartwarming, and I think it also teaches a great moral, which is that we can help the creatures of the earth.

As for technical aspects, you have done a very good job. You have a good writing style and a very clear voice. I could not find any grammar or spelling errors in this story! Good Job!

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Positives and Negatives

Positives

+This story is very heartwarming and enjoyable to read!
+There are no grammar errors in this item
+You have a very clear voice, and your writing style is very good!
+There are no spelling errors in this item
+The story is the right length for the target audience
+I felt the characters were well-developed and had good motivations
+This story has a good moral to it

Negatives

-None that I could find! Good Job!
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Final Thoughts!

I really liked this item! I think you have written a very heartwarming and enjoyable story! You have a very impressive story here, and I enjoyed it immensely! Good Job and Write on!
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