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 The First Snow 2014 Open in new Window. [E]
The First Snow 2014
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi arlene,
This is a wonderful poem. The tone is formal and suits the poem and subject matter very well. The reader is taken back to winter walks and the beautiful scenery they saw. The free verse works superbly here and you have handled it very well. The poem has a fantastic rhythm. The poem flows extremely well and is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from enjoying the poem. Great job.

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