Review of showering acts of joy


Part of the SAJ garden;

Overall impression of piece:I have kind of walked this road a while too. I get this.

Grammatical and spelling errors:Seems intact

What I liked? I like the personal and feeling part of this. It definitely seems real to me. This really is about relationship

What I disliked. Something to think about. : The supernatural doesn't enter in until later.. It almost seems that some other eathly person is going to be a savior. Obviously, this is not the case. What is his light like? Scripture says it is a lamp unto my feet. It means with the high power, you can only still see the next step. I think that is where the faith comes in.

With so many tending this way, maybe a more definitive picture about a solution. Perhaps the you intervening should be replaced by I interceding. First couple of stanzas are kind of cliche about depression.

How the piece made me feel: Is depression a lack of faith? I had to think about that one. Impatience is definitely not walking in the Spirit. Neither is not being joyful. Does God cheer us on to His glory. I think I can buy that. I think the world without any spiritual guidance is depressing

Hope this helps. Use my ideas as your creativity alchemy deems fitting

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