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 | Silent Lucidity  [ASR] A patient discovers he is still awake but paralized during his operation.  |
| (4.0)  HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"    HI S.Wynterborne! Happy One year Anniversary! I am here with a review to celebrate you!  Wow! This is a creepy episode. The line at the end really hit its mark.  Your description of this man undergoing surgery is vivid and you draw us into his growing awareness naturally. The idea that he is aware is freaky. I was puzzled when you said he couldn't recall after the incident--does that mean he pulls through? The ending evoked other possibilities. The last paragraph gives a real sensate picture of this being with its creepy voice and scarey appearance. Yikes! I hope it is just a nightmare and he will wake up. Not a pleasant experience while in surgery. The title works ! You did a good job with the present tense though I noticed in the third verse it changed-- he couldn't begin, pain was exploding etc. I couldn't help but read on to see what would happen and then you leave us hanging. Good ploy!Thanks for sharing your crafting and allowing me to enter the dream. Light on the path as you write on!! eyestar   My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 02/09/2016 @ 9:16pm EST