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 Red or Green. Mr Thompson Open in new Window. [GC]
A simple choice, drastic consequences.
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Rated: GC | (4.0)
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** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** *BalloonR* Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" Open in new Window.! suspense well told. clever plot.

should be 'here' not 'her' "ou could wait her for just a"

A short story with only four characters and plenty of suspense; each participant in the 'scientific study' was to receive 'compensation' for participating; a lesson was learned that would scar off every person willing to volunteer for some so called studies...or it's poor compensation.

a mystery with strong suspense elements to this story; well written and darn scary.

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Noticing Newbies Open in new Window. (13+)
A warm welcome to our newbies; come meet new and not-so-new members of Writing.Com!
#126963 by The StoryMistress Author IconMail Icon
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