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 World Peace Open in new Window. [E]
World Peace is here now among the truly religious and spiritual souls on earth.
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** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** *BalloonR* Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" Open in new Window.! " I would let the following phrase summarize this essay: "a very spiritually conscious life"
This is the kind of message needed by every individual...then we would have what I write about very often: a world where people communicate effectively with respect.

You'll want to have many WDC readers and reviews: to encourage readership, you need white space between paragraphs so the reader's eyes can rest. I do it by doublespacing between paragrapsh in Word then when I place it here, there's the white space. OR, when ou post, check he box "double space between paragraphs' then you'll have more readers. All Newbies learn that eventually.

Your essay has a profound message. I find it hardest to live "the spiritually conscious life' most of all when interacting or dealing with the hypocrites in religioius organizations; their hearts are filled with hatred, animosity and prejudice, which shows in their words and actions every day of their lives. What this world needs is fewer religions and churches, then your message would be lived because nobody could say "God made me do it" to justify their anger and prejudice.

I believe your words are all true and that there are some of us who try to live by truth, honesty,kindness, as a positive example to children who are the makers of tomorrow's world. I hope you have dozens of readers, even more, who believe and practice wha you've said in this excellent essay. You have clearly shown what is needed to make the world better.

Keep Writing.
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