Hello Fhionnuisce,

I found your story "My Lady of the Mist" to be a very enjoyable read.

I do not pretend to be an English major or an expert in grammar. I am simply offering my humble opinion concerning your work. I hope you find this feedback useful

Overall Impression: Frankly this is not the genre of reading I am accustomed to but I found it drew me right in. The descriptive language you used made it easy to put myself there and envision the mist covered pond. The story read like a musical crescendo building and building until their touch and the midnight waltz. I thought it was very well written.

Grammar and Mechanics: I saw no problems with your writing mechanics or grammar

Suggestions: The only suggestion I have is to keep putting pen to paper (or fingers to keyboard) You are very talented and I look forward to reading/reviewing more of your work.

I also see you are new to WDC and want to welcome you

Thank you for sharing your story.

I welcome you to visit my portfolio and offer a review on any piece that may interest you

Rozebud

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