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 My Wife is A Teacher Open in new Window. [E]
I wrote this for my wife. She recently retired from teaching after 36 years
by Twiggs Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Wow! This poem made me feel really, really happy. I'm a teacher myself and it just feels so good to see the way you appreciate your wife's work, and how proud you are of her. I love the little touches like the chair never being used because she's always moving around in the classroom, and how she won't admit it, but you know that she loves her students as much as her own kids!

My suggestion would be for the 'genre'. I see you've left it at 'other'. This does not show up on lists and your work gets less exposure. You could do an edit and choose up to three genres, so that this poem gets wider visibility!

Thanks for sharing this.

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Sonali

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