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 That lost feeling Open in new Window. [E]
Everyone has a lost feeling and i felt like i needed to share what i thought about it.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Purple!
Although I'm not a romantic, I did enjoy this piece. And it's relevant to me because years ago I had to go through a divorce. We were high school lovers (not so much 'sweethearts') and young. We were hitched for about 31/2 years with 2 daughters, and it wasn't until we were officially seperated and she found a new guy that I realized just how much I truly did love her. It took me a very long time to get over that, even though we were still friends (with the girls we had to be). Fortunately though, I survived. And after 25 years have gone by, we are still good friends.
Great spelling and telling, but what I liked most was your way of telling people that there are ways to at least take your mind off of your grief.
One niggle:
'...when they lose something important(,) or special to them.' (don't need that comma)
Good job, Purple, and welcome to WdC!

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