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 Hello? Open in new Window. [ASR]
Doubt you're there; doubt you'd care
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HI MI Melis!
This is different. Good, but different. I like the ambiguity of it; not letting the reader know who exactly you're talking to, but I'm pretty sure that it's God by how speak of us being made in His image. Please don't get me wrong, but it almost sounds a bit sacreligious.
The rhyming was very good though, as was the spelling.
The main thing is that you're speaking your mind, and that's all that really counts, right?
Kee ponw ritin gon, MI, and welcome to WdC!

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