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Hi Rapunzel!
This isn't bad. It think it's great that you can write about your 'affliction' because it allows you to get a lot of things off of your mind. My oldest daughter has personality disorder, and she goes through a lot of bad days (she also has 4 kids). But for a long time they didn't know what she had-she was at first diagnosed with Bipolar.
My point is that you've done yourself a favor by writing this, and for being only 16 you show promise as a young writer. I also think your father is a wonderful man for encouraging you to write!
DON'T STOP!!!
Kee ponw ritin gon, Rap, and welcome to WdC!
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Have a great day!

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