Hello born-san ,

Review of "Dream" 

General Comments:

A beautiful poem narrating a dream and a wake up into reality. The dream is almost like reality sometimes and even when we wake up, we feel that we are in the dream and it felt so real and true, this poem is such a poem. I like how you ended the poem, the last stanza shows how when you wake up in reality, the love is there and that make a prefect ending to the poem. Well written.

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

~Princess Zelda