Hello cuckoo ,

Review of "My love and apple pie" 

General Comments:

A poem about true love. The poem narrates a scene of what happens as the wife/lover prepares a dish for her husband/lover. She prepares herself to completely satisfy her lover and she makes an apple pie, however even the mistakes she makes at preparing a perfect dish ends up as a show of what true love is all about. Nice narration and poem, well written.

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

~Princess Zelda