Hello sunrise ,

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General Comments:

A wonderful poem talking about children's purity. I agree with everything you have written here, I agree that as children, everything is pure, simple and full of hope. Now as an adult I cannot imagine how we lived a peaceful and carefree life as a child, with dreams. I like how you have taken different aspects and explained them, such as soul, eye, love etc... The title fits the content very well and the color chosen suits well with the theme and feel of the poem. Well written.


Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

~Princess Zelda