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 Changing of Seasons in You Face Open in new Window. [E]
Poem About Love
by Becky Davenport Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Becky Davenport Author Icon,

Review of "Changing of Seasons in You FaceOpen in new Window.

General Comments:

A beautiful poem on love describing the one you love. I like how you've used so many colors to bring out the qualities of your loved one. And you have used the seasons to describe as well, very nicely brought together a lovely love poem. There is small spelling mistake I noticed, "a small flciker remains" which should be "flicker". A wonderful poem with lovely expressions of love. Well written.

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

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