Hello mizzkris20,

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General Comments:

A poem about a night when a person meets his brother and how it seems to be. You were collecting the memories of this brother who is now no more and suddenly you felt his presence and feels like he was really there with you. You could feel it because there was a sudden joy and peace filling you. Your poem is free form and the emotions are very well explained here, and keep the reader wondering if this a real incident or not. I like it how you have capitalized the words Memories, Angel etc... The best lines are in the last paragraph, sometimes we feel that there is someone close to us and we can almost see and touch them but they are actually not there. You made me think of my lost loved ones too. Well written

Overall:
A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing your work.. Keep writing..

~Princess Zelda